Sawata!

This was a request. The text placement might be a little weird but that's because that's where they wanted me to put the text. Anyway, comments and criticism please. (I did this right after reading a tutorial, actually.)

 

i dont reallyl ike the text and the contrast is way to bright imo other then that i like it

 

Thanks! Yeah, I always have a lot of trouble with the text. Any tips on how to get text to fit in better would be great. =D

 

Bump? o.o

 

Hey Hyper

I see C4Ds in the BG but they do not belong. They would if the stock/render was in between the two C4Ds. The text in the top left would be better placed in the bottom left since it is actually over parts of the C4D. The bottom left has nothing really going on. The effects are lacking, you've done more and better effects in past work. Coloring is not blended. Sure everything is orange and yellow but it's not blended together. The colors look very raw. A B/W gradient map can help them blend a lot better. Or a purple/yellow gradient map on Soft Light.. Your text is still not showing improvement. You should play around with more fonts.. Like using a cursive font for the capital letters for example. Just something to catch more attention.

 

Thanks for the comment! ^_^ Yeah, I struggle with text and blending a lot unfortunately. But if I use multiple fonts in my text, how do I make it look like it was like, always like that if you know what I mean, rather then put together?

 

Playing with different sizes of it.. PS actually has a lot of different settings for text. Like you can close up the spacing of the font or making the spacing between letters larger and many other settings. All I suggest is downloading new fonts.