OMG where the f are the boobies ??? V1 is scary at colours so v2 wins Nice concept, needs a tidy bit more depth behind the render -Bad Boy
Why does everyone do a black/white version of everything, it sucks. ^ This one gets my seal of approval. -
B/W makes up for colour errors because black and white always goes with black and white. It's an easy-way-out. ( . )( . ) Because somebody was going to do it. I like your first version better. It's nice, it works together, it all fits. And the text isn't "in your face" to ruin the tag but it's still there so we all know about it. Good placement too. I like it. It feels hot.
To too mono and over crowded. Try to dye down the bussyness, and make it flow more. Lighting and Depth could be better too