C&c Please

i know im not great at making tags but i am learning and want some better feed back then the one forum i go on xD so here it is.



v2

 

Lighting is misplaced, should be positioned in the top left of the tag since lighting is coming from the top of his head in that direction.. Needs more effects to make it stand out, BG is plain to me and most of it looks overblurred. Colors need to be improved as well. You using gradient maps for your coloring?

 

i use some gradient maps and it is plain but i didnt like it with more effects seemed worse to me and i should of made the top one side more colored and stuff but i didnt

 

Yeah lighting, I don't really like the white blur on the bottom of him.

 

v2 is def better the render is more blended gj dude

 

the render isnt working with the background
try blending it, alot more.
v2 is an improvement.

 

i have problems blending in renders i dont know why i just cant get it to work out lol

 

You blurred your background too much, also the lightning isnt even light, try setting it on color dodge, or just put an new white light source above your old one on overlay.

 

so more light above his head? any tips on blending?

 

No, on the exact same place as your old light source

 

v3 better?

 

anymore comments?