Mountain Path

I was unsure about what to make so I decided to do something with colors and practice on depth.
I started with a colorful stock and smudged it till the only thing that was left were colors. Flat, there were no elevations in it.

So I decided to make a mountain path and add depth to make it look like one. (Can you see a mountain path in it?)




C&C please

 

Don't really see a mountain path at all.

You need more vibrant colors if you want to pull off an all smudging tag, imo. The colors seem bland and clash to me and I'm not really like the text much, sorry. ;\

 

ii dont see a mountain eitherthe smudging is good but i agree u need a few different colors in there

 

Ok thanx for the comments, was the first time I tried something like this.

 

Smudging needs to be better, looks like you've smudged it till it seemed blurry. Smudging gets that kind of effect if it is smudged too much. It's an interesting concept however, clean it up and change the colors.

 

I can see 2 montain and a path inbetween ._.
I agree with anything pink tho...

Try make it B/W then use over and over color balance erasing the unecessary parts and seting the opacity, u might get a nice outcome of it

 

Yeah its nice and abstract, but work with your colors.

 

its a pretty nice try but u should change the colors