Wow, awesome job on the text there, I just don't like your name behind him, cause you can't really see the whole thing.
The reason I did the Incog text that way is to make it seem like if you were looking at him from the other side, you would see Incog, the same way you see the Ironman text; red infront, black behind.
u said u think it seems unfinished, what about adding some waves like he was breaking the wind in front of him..?