Yeah, would this help if you ran the text along the top of the bottom rail Good job though Ohh and thanks for the render packs love em!
I didn't see the first version but the text doesn't look bad on this one I like the colors and depth, good job. I prefer your other style though ^^.
I just think a different font would look better, for the text. Its got good placement. The sig looks good, it looks like a cut from an LP. You should try an LP of this style, I think it would fit it more.
Looks good. I noticed all your sigs have very thick edges. If thick is not the right word, then very full edges.
I like it a lot. It's something different but as has been mentioned before, the text isn't one of the better parts. I'd either get rid of it completely or choose a new font because right now it just doesn't seem to fit in well