~ Timeshift Ii ~

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  1. Jul 9, 2008 at 9:11 AM #1
    YashBhatt

    YashBhatt Well-Known Member

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    TimeShift Signature
    FeedBack Apprected !!

    Here it is :

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    Please do give a FeedBack
     
  2. Jul 9, 2008 at 9:18 AM #2
    -Sя.WolfganG

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    fx, text, text, color, compo = awesome!
    work on the depth a little and you have a winner.. :)
     
  3. Jul 9, 2008 at 9:38 AM #3
    Sanity Penguin

    Sanity Penguin My sex is on fire

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    I see you took my advice on the clipping mask over the text? ^^

    Like wolfgang said, great colours, flow and blending. Good job on this one ;)
     
  4. Jul 9, 2008 at 9:52 AM #4
    YashBhatt

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    Thanks Sanity,I did the Text as you Said :D
    And wolfgang thanks Mate for the advice ;)
     
  5. Jul 9, 2008 at 9:55 AM #5
    Ryuuji

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    awsome.
    the focal looks a bit too dark, but maybe that's just me.
    love the colors and effect, great job overall
     
  6. Jul 9, 2008 at 10:20 AM #6
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    idk how i can contribute other than reinforce that the only thing u need to work on is depth.
     
  7. Jul 9, 2008 at 11:14 AM #7
    Vpr99

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    Yea, I like it alot too!
     
  8. Jul 9, 2008 at 1:35 PM #8
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    Just get the blur tool and blur the open places a little bit, but not too much. That should add some depth.
     
  9. Jul 9, 2008 at 1:40 PM #9
    Morpheus

    Morpheus A dying Star.

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    no need to say more.
     
  10. Jul 9, 2008 at 1:42 PM #10
    Prince Zainx

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    Need to fix lighting, text, effects, and overall a bit more depth and clear focal.

    Add a small lightsource next towards the bottom of the tag, for lighting.
    Take out the text for now, and place it somewhere next to render with a clipping mask on it of the tag.
    Give it a little bit of brightness and contrast layer.
    A small gradeint map or curves layer should do the trick for depth.

    Etc etc...

    Check out SP's Tutorials for some tips and tricks
    http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php...=382952&hl=

    -Zain x
     
  11. Jul 10, 2008 at 12:32 PM #11
    HardToName

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    Nice colors
     
  12. Jul 10, 2008 at 1:14 PM #12
    ThE DaRkSiD3

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    wow i love it looks really good :D :D time shift is also a great game :D
     

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