You placed the c4ds too random So it lacks flow a bit, i like the colors and the lightning. You did quite a good job, keep it up.
I would recommend losing the bright cd4 to the right or lowering it's opacity. It stands out far too much and really does pull away from the main point of hte sig the render. still isnt bad just needs some touch ups. good work none the less.
composition looks weird, theres like.. no flow in there :/ Colors and the overall tag are very messy. Text could be better but its ok.. keep at it.
Thanks for the honesty Faith. However, I was going for a chaotic type of sig, yet now I know I should have gone with flow...