First Lp

<div align="center">Well, this is my actual first attempt at making an LP.

yea, i dont know what point i was trying to make with it, it was really random.



c&c is grealy appreciated

http://nitrx.deviantart.com/art/What-91180101</div>

 

noy bad at all looks good dude great job

 

thanks

anymore?

 

I like it, gj .

 

I like it except for the black bit over the logo, bar that its smexy.

 

saw this on s3

not bad for a first, but you need clean up your work, find better stocks, and work on blending/lighting tecniques for starts

 

thats ur first lol

better then mine

wow i feel like such a n00bz