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v2



c&c please.</div>

 

V1 gmv I like the feeling of this but the light seems a bit too bright and unnatural, maybe lower the opacity or linear dodge

 

"Thanks nice but the girl looks beveled?

 

I have the weird impression that the body is 3d and the head is 2d...
it's got good depth, but i agree with zero on the light

 

ahhh now i see wut yah mean.. well i think u did well executing it..
v2 for me.. u could play around with the flow perhaps.. see wut else outcome yah gonna get..
but its lookin great alrdy..

 

I fixed the light, and as far as the head being 2d and body being 3d, i agree, but unfortunately theres really nothing i could do about it since her hair is extremely black (even w/o any adjustments)

thanks for the comments

 

the lighting looks off, it should be darker were she is and brighter as it gets closer to the exit light

 

Look at her back, the stock was originally like that, im just going to stick with there is a light over her shoulder out of the picture.

 

v1 light looks unnatural

 

v1 gmv,u knwo what it left,just draw the shadow of the girl and it would be fricken awesome

 

ok then, but it still should be lighter near the exit where the main light sorce is coming from

 

better?

 

thats a lot better nitrx =)
nice one.

 

yes thats alot better, good job i like it ^_^

 

I like it but what is on her back? If that is text it should blend it a tad bit better or be placed in a better location. Whatever it is it kinda sticks out like a blemish.