Not sure which one I'd prefer, the text fits with the rest. You did a good job on the effects. I would change that green to a different color though.
I like the version with no text; blend the cinema 4D render in a little better and change the colors a bit. You then will have a really cool signature.
What I meant was that the green didn't blend with the current color scheme. Use Selective Coloring and get make it a red or something that matches.
Oh hell no. The Green compliments the Orange. The colour scheme is absolutely unique and the way it is done is original. Something that matches Orange = Yellow, Red = Boring. Breaking boundaries by using 2 colours that 80% fail when together. He made the 20%. The type is small, yet I can read it perfectly on a huge resolution. If I did have any compliant, I would say he used too much Orange. -
brilliant sig, not much to complain about, just the green on the left looks a bit out of place, not blended very well, i think everyone else prty much covered it.
