Rasengan!

After reading through a tutorial, I went ahead and made this experiment sprite sig. Personally, I don't like it all that much and I definitely don't think it's one of my better works. I didn't really plan ahead with this one either so that may be reflected in the outcome. Anyway, I'll leave it up to you guys to give some CnC.

 

Bump.

 

It's a pretty good attempt, and I see you tried to capture flow by making some of the BG swirl.. However the colors don't go well at all.. I would have went went a cyan and orange theme for the colors I think.. Text is not too bad, this is actually good text compared to some of your others. Just the color and placing of the text throws it off. I also would have made the signature smaller since sprite signatures look best on smaller sizes IMO.

 

I also think it would look better smaller (do as I say, not as I do ), and I don't really like the colors, but it's not bad at all for your first attempt.
maybe you could have tried adding more effects, to make it look more "complete"

 

Thanks for the comments. I'll make a few changes and post a second version.

 

Alright, finished Version 2. Here it is.



Personally, I like it much better then my original. :]

 

I prefer it too.
slimmer, more effects, and such.
maybe with some effects in the foreground, over the render, it would have been better.
the colors still don't really do it for me tho

 

ya see where ya have the splatter under his legs going with flow? add more continuing the same flow but dont over crowd it and then add a lil effect to his feet in same motion, I would also try to change a lil color tones to sprite so it matches up or fix bg colors so they fit together..not bad your gettin better...