First Sprite Tag

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Ryuuji, Jul 5, 2008.

  1. Ryuuji

    Ryuuji Senior Member

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    as the topic title says, this is the first time I try a sprite tag, so i'd really like criticism, and suggestions.

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    thought i'd mess up worse the first time :P
    but yeah, I'm expecting though critics, don't hold back...
     
  2. GAm3rX

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    Better then i could ever do so :) good job
     
  3. Ryuuji

    Ryuuji Senior Member

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    thanks.
    anyone else?
     
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    crop like 10 or 20 pixels off the top
     
  5. Ryuuji

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    yeah, might help the feeling of unused space. i might update it later, thanks
     
  6. OkamithePhantom

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    Way to-much open space; The colors are pretty good I would say just work on them alittle more and I really like the effect behind Vegeta.
     
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    Lately your BG has been lacking in your sigs, Ryuuji. For sprites, they can look pretty good with a simple gradient dragged across on linear mode.. I would have liked to see you add more of your effects, seems to be more of sprite effects than effects you made.
     
  8. Ryuuji

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    yeah you're right, i mostly used sprite effects and didn't work much on the bg.
    that's pretty much because I wanted to experiment with those new things, i'll think more about that next time.
    thanks for the comments everyone
     
  9. Hyper Infinity

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    I don't like the background so much. However, I love the effects around the sprite and such. Looks really cool. Could've used text but looks fine without it. Good job on this! My rating: 9/10
     
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    KA-ME-MAHEHAHAHAH
    nice ;)
     

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