Thoughts And Crit?

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by J o n, Jul 4, 2008.

  1. J o n

    J o n Member

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    C&C?
     
  2. astranger79

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    not much depth at all, and seems to be 2 focals. i like the text, teach me!
    that wavy white line is pretty random, like ripped paper.

    pretty meh to me.
     
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    Just needs some better colouring, lighting.. The depth looks fine to me :eek:
     
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    matchs colors more

    otherwise its hot
     

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