I absolutely love it. Render blends in wonderfully and the effects are awesome. Could've used a little more lighting on the focal point but the focal point is still pretty easy to find. And you're right about the text, it's almost perfect, although the 8 Mile part is a little hard to read. Overall, it's really good. My rating: 10/10
Good blending and effects. Really like that grid-thing to the left Not too fond of the grunge effect though. I'd get rid of the effects over the arm too, they look a bit weird there
