Meet The Pyro

just a sig i whipped up using a screenshot in team fortress 2.

not perfectly happy with it at all.

any tips? especially on the text, im terrible at text.

V1


V1 - no text


V2

 

its got nice flow, not too fond of the text but it works out well :]

 

V nice flow, just not liking the text at all sorry =[

 

I like the colors and the flow, but you shoudl sharpen the render just a little bit, so you will have a better focal. And the text sucks a bit yeah.

 

i know, im terrible at text, i might just remove it, sharpen the pyro and post that, in the mean time.. any1 got tips for what i cld do with the text?

 

my vote goes to removing it completely
or at least get rid of those white lines

 

ok, removed the text, and make a 2nd verison, smudged up and the pyro is brighter

 

As basically everyone has said. Nice flow. Text has go too go. Pretty Nice coloring.

 

the text is alrdy gone. and dont forget v2

 

oo didnt se those. V2 it is then

 

Looks cool but yey the text sucks