You should lower the opacity of the names. Slightly blur the ones in the back. Maybe throw in some depth of field. It's pretty neat though.
Now that is ruddy good. I agree on the names needing to be intergrated more. You should have put a dead body behind him or something lol -
I was actually going to put a brain in but I couldn't get it to work. Thanks for the comments especially you Acrima, if I get a good comment from you it must be good.
Looks really good. Looks real, actually. The lighting is perfect, the text is perfect, and the render looks like it belongs there. And I love how the tie stands out. My rating: 10/10
awsome i argee with above poster just lower opacity of names and i think blur the shadow in the doorway about. i think its too crisp but overall its awsome +++
I love it. I agree with what others said about the names. And was wondering, the shadow in the lighting, is that supposed to be there? I'm sure it is, don't think you would miss it.
On the left door, theres a shadow. Is there a man coming after him? Anyway, pretty good. Do a few gaussin blurs on the back text's and you'll do fine.