Hot Asian!

v3



V1



V2



any suggestions? really working with blending and the splatter and lighting effects
and which text is better?

 

The thing behind the second text isn't alright, and text itself doesn't fit the overall aspect of the tag.
Also, the head, the face looking thing seem to be floating. And there's something under her mouth.

 

it has no lighting whatsoever, however everything else I'm feeling. v1 is better.

 

ok thanks! anything to improve it?

 

Add lightsource down left, burn right side of the tag.

 

give the c4d under her some more ZING and add a light source to the left of her face.

 

ok guys how about this

 

MUCH better man!

 

thanks alot!

 

sharpen the focal point, will look even better.

also, current it.

 

i put it as my signature!
this is sharpened .. not sure if i did it ok or not..

 

First version is my favorite by far. It has good lighting. They all have good effects. But the third version's text, I like the most. They probably could've used a border. My rating: 8/10

 

thanks very much

 

that stock is copyrighted btw

its against the law to use it...or something like that

 

At this point, does it really matter? I'm sure the stock police won't mind this time.

Nice sig man.