A bit hard to find the focal at first, requires a half a second of thinking, but a great sig nonetheless.
Woha, i really like cnc at GR. When i make something awesome, you talk alot. When i make something ----ty, you love it. Also, i didn't use c4d, so i don't know what you're talking about.
It's oversharpened; makes the image flat. Blur some of the foreground and background; assuming your focal is the guy with teh gunz. Good tag overall.
Probably... My favorite tag I've ever seen.. Hope whoever buys it makes a tutorial. Depth,color,stock... All sexy. Great Job.