This one was a request. I tried to use very little C4Ds in this one. I did a bit more with lightening and darkening some areas. I tried to make the text on this one more glowy and it seems to fit in well to me, but hopefully it doesn't draw attention away from what is supposed to be the focal point. On the right side, I think I made it a little too dark in my personal opinion. But other then that stuff, I honestly think I did pretty good. Anyway, I'll let you guys be the judge of that.
you should have used the c4ds I like the bg, but the render doesn't blend in and the effect colors look weird. the right places are ok, but you really need to blend the render in
maybe try changing it to black and white and using the smudge tool to blend the render, then it would look good