Another Attempt

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by reborn`, Jun 30, 2008.

  1. Jun 30, 2008 at 2:12 PM #1
    reborn`

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    looking for more constructive feed back,.. thanks.
     
  2. Jun 30, 2008 at 4:44 PM #2
    reborn`

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    oh common no comments?
     
  3. Jun 30, 2008 at 4:59 PM #3
    ciddchaos

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    Well i like the right side of it then we get to the render which looks like just a head there sorta weird looking =) and the left side sorta a to big a contrast to the rest of the sig and also has nothing in it, so full of life then sorta ... dead looks good could use improvement in those areas though
     
  4. Jun 30, 2008 at 5:05 PM #4
    Ikuzo

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    it's a real mess bro, no flow at all and the lighting is all wrong.
     
  5. Jun 30, 2008 at 5:12 PM #5
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    In comparison to your other sig, this one is very good... Overall, this one could use less contrast, more flow, and better lighting. 5.5/10
     
  6. Jun 30, 2008 at 5:13 PM #6
    Ryuuji

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    even tho some effects are very nice, it's completely lacks flow, and it looks like the head is floating by itself, which i don't like much.
    there's also too much empty space imo
     

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