[wip] Grey Goose

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by beastiekid, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. beastiekid

    beastiekid Well-Known Member

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    yeahh i need some ideas im pretty stuck any help would be great
    dont say anything bout the text i just put it there.

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    i reckon it looks good for the most part, the swirling lines dont look as appealing to me, they dont look very good IMO, but otherwise, great work!!

    maybe try a darker background? white web over black? dont take me to seriously though, i only recently joined gr, and have little previous experience with graphics
     
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    haha thanks for the input tips are tips regardless of when you joined
     
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    Um... try working on the little blue curvy lines, try to use a sharper brush, and maybe have them come to a point at the end. Also, try to work on the blending of it, maybe a couple of photo filters or gradient maps?
     
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    yeah ive been trying to get a good blend on it for the past couple of hours lol and ill try the sharper lines
     
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    v2 and v3 up
     
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    When you curve the lines around the bottle, the line fades in yours. Don't do that, it looks like you couldn't be bothered putting in the effort to harden the line and make it seem that it truly goes around the bottle.

    The line going over the bottle at the bottom is distracting. Brushwork could be improved, but on the whole, the tag is nice.
     

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