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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Ryuuji, Jun 27, 2008.

  1. Ryuuji

    Ryuuji Senior Member

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  2. Ryuuji

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    bump <_<
     
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    The blue/green signs stand out too much and look bad with the other colours..
    Left side is nice but very repetitive and boring. Right is somewhat interesting, bar the signs in the middle.
    Could do with some nicer blending of colours, but right now it looks good :)
     
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    I think I see what kind of concept you were going for.. But it needs to be cleaned up a lot more. Cause I can't really tell what am I suppose to be seeing.
     
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    Too chaotic. I don't know what's going on in the sig even after looking at it for a few minutes.

    I don't know what's what.
     
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    effects needs better composition, atm i cant tell what the focal is.
     
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    Needs better compo, also the fire look a bit fake. Also, fix the negative space on the right.
     
  8. Ryuuji

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    Heh, I know, it was some kind of "test", and I wasn't even sure about showing it.
    But I wanted to have more opinions on what went wrong, so thanks everybody
     
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    super sexay outcome.. love wut yah did with that render..
    suggestion = text :P :)
    great tag mate
     
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    thanks, even tho I really don't like the whole left part...
    and yeah, some text might have given it a more complete look
     
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    It's okay. It's certainly...busy. I like the effects though I agree on it being a bit too chaotic and because of that I can't really find a focal point my eyes just wander everywhere. The green signs I don't mind to be honest, I like seeing more then one color in there and it doesn't seem to clash with the orange all that much either, at least not in my opinion. And there should be something in the empty black space on the right. My rating: 6.5/10
     

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