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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .Rey, Jun 25, 2008.

  1. .Rey

    .Rey Well-Known Member

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    Well this is my first official tag. Please rate, and tell me how I did. (Also this was made with Paint shop ---, and not photoshop)

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    V2: Sharpend

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    V3: Burned edges, blured some parts

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    nanSTA Senior Member

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    The focal is too blurry.
     
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    .Rey Well-Known Member

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    Alright. I fixed it.

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    Burn the sides so it adds more focal, It's also a tad grainy. that could just be the render but still.
     
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    Thanks for the suggestion.

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    The whole signature looks kinda a blurry/grainy. The lighting is nice, and the colours are good. Keep it up.
     
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    Omg for your 1st, that's amazing :eek:
    v3 owns
     
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    Very good effort for your first, the whole needs a little more dpeth, play around with the sharpening and blur tools. Also make the text more dominant.
     
  9. .Rey

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    Thanks for the comments guys.
     

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