To be honest this is a tad bit older work I just got a new computer I was using a comp from 1999/2000 that had a max resolution of 800x600 so yeah on the last one and maybe chung lee pardon the cruddy blending in some spots.
Okay.. The first one heavily lacks effects. The stock looks horrible so you shouldn't have even used that one. It's very flat, nothing catches my attention except for the blue colors since that's my favorite color. I like the effects in the second one. However it needs to be cleaned up more. Like the pink line running along his right shoulder which breaks the flow of the smudging effects you did. Text is okay in this one, could be a lot better. I'm sorry, but the Chung Li one is just bad. The flow is destroyed.. I see C4Ds going NW, and a few going NE above the text. The flow needs to go NE, along with her kick. Because the action she is doing is the focus, so that points you in the direction of the flow. When you make sprite signatures stick to small a smaller width and height. The fourth one is pretty messy.. Seems like you used the Noise filter. When using the Noise filter, blur the layer with the Noise effect, or else you'll end up with choppiness. Blurring it can smoothen it out, even make it look like smudging. The vector arrows are misplaced. I see what you were trying to do though, by creating flow with the arrows. But I wouldn't use vectors with that sort of render. It does not compliment each other. The last one.. Well I'm not going to say much since you probably already know.. It's messy and the effects are even over the focal, it needs a better directed flow. Over all: Work on composition Choose better coloring Use better text Be more picky about the renders/stocks you use Work on flow and effects.
I always get the critcal people x3 but its needed while I see some room on the second sig to be honest mostly im happy with it but the others yeah they need work x.x sadly these are all over a year old I just wanted to get some pointers on stuff to work with since I feel like getting back into sig making again. The second sig too sadly was just a pic not even a render and the other renders I cant really remember and yeah the chung lee her kick doesnt go in the direction of the effect but that was the point when I made it but I think I like hard contrast so I need to more or less get myself away from clashing things. Hey gay people know better then I with colors and flow x3 just teasing <3 I heart gay people as much as straigh people lol Thanks again.
