Lighting is forced and it is choppy/over-sharpened in some places. Not really feeling the colored version as it is just as dull as the B&W, maybe some more and effects and some more color?
v2 for me i like it and the lighting is lees forced on the black and white version too,try to work on the lighting a bit on v1,good job,nice tag
i like it. i tend to prefer colored versions, so yeah, V1 for me. but i agree with the others on the light, and the fact that it looks a bit dull. maybe some burning and dodging might help it?
V2 is better. Your signature is oversharpend and the lighting is forced. You do have good flow though.