The brown C4D on the left seems out of place, kinda disrupts the flow imo. Maybe rotate it to the left... Otherwise i really like it. great depth...
Its pretty nice, nothing to laugh about at all. I like the depth, but the flow is on some spots a bit weird, and confusing.
I like it. Blur the brown C4D slightly to create a better depth of field. Make the orange look more like light, brush in some slight orange/white in linear dodge or screen.