I don't really feel like C&Cing... But I don't have a god damn choice... Anyways, it's very interesting. It's clean and looks great, but it isn't really attention grabbing.
Hmm its different, don't really know where I'm gona go with this but lets see.. mabey darken out the walls a little bit, and make it look more like hes on a show with a spot light on him..... like render lighting then use an omni light. Id say add some more grass, to give more to the background. Maby find a picture of an oning(spling?) (sunroof basically) and put it at the top of the signature, just to add more to it ya know. Just see what ya could use to help grab the eyes more basically.