Looks great m8,i would go with the text tbh,it takes away from the main focal,overall nice tag,good job KIU
Yellow makes it a bit too bright IMO. Also, it's a little overcontrasted. Other than that, I love it. Gj.
Man you've gotten pretty good, this one is sexy.I would say bright up the girl, and maybe add a b&w gradient map on luminosity(opacity being your choice) for some "shine".