the only two things I can say I could do without is the white line patterns and the brightness but I like dark art so take that as ya want lol other than that I like it I like but not your best and you know that! lol
the white bars disrupt the flow of the tag the colorings pretty good other wise but the orange brushing doesnt really fit in
Hate to reitterate whats already been said so im saying other things I think the colors are good but they are a bit overbearing, and should probably be toned down a little cause to me they just feel like they over power the render. Also the text is a bit hard to read, but i am blind in one eye so take that as others mention. Now as its already been said the white line pattern really kinda kills the sig fix those things and itll be great, till then id have to say 6.5/10
Personally i think it looks great,the only thing i would maybe do is take away the fist 2 of the white line things to the left as we look,overall nice work m8 as always