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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Proximity-HazeD, Jun 7, 2008.

  1. Proximity-HazeD

    Proximity-HazeD Well-Known Member

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    Well, this is my latest work, obviously.
    Yet, it is the second signature I've made since my return to photoshop and GR
    Sooooooo! What do you guys think?
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    nice dirty stuff. maybe only a bit messy. nice sig
     
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    nice i like it.but the render is abit too sharpy.lol 7/10.
     
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    Smexy... Like the colors. Maybe focal is a little sharp, but still nice. Flow is tight. Text is tight as well.
     
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    Nice teext and usesage of C4D
     
  6. JL Wamm

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    nice work i like it
     
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    Nice sig. I like the colors. The design is very clean.

    However I think the composition could be improved by keeping your focal out of the center and staying in line with the rule of thirds.

    Hope that helps.
     
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    looks great, i love the colors and effects.
    keep up the good work. =^.^=
     
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    Feels a little unbalanced, cause there's alot more going on in the right side than there is on the left.
    I love the depth, colors, and the background.
    And the text is pretty good as well.
    The biggest problems are lighting (the render looks like it should be coming from behind but you have it in front), over sharp in some areas, and as i said balance.
    Nice work for only your second one since being back.
     
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    i love it can`t w8 for your next dude
     
  11. Proximity-HazeD

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    Thanks for that C&C the main reason its so sharp is the render wasn't the best quality, i had to do a few things to it to make it less sharp.
    and the comment on the center point, i might change it i think your right, it would look better goin by 3rd's
    Thank you as well silent like i said though the render was really sharp but i liked it so i gave it a try, THANK YOU so much for the C&C guys really!!
    I'll work on it and update it if i like the changes. THX!
     

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