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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by superklutch3000, Jun 1, 2008.

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    looks hot dude, only not liking the text.. the color especially.
     
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    Well, I just followed the tut, luckily I still have the psd for this, I can still edit it, I'll try moving the text and changing color, and then a no text version.

    Thanks for the comment
     
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    the idea of the text is good, but the lines around it look too bright, maybe a lower opacity? blur? shadow? idk just try something ;)
     
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    i think it looks better then the outcome of the tutorial u followed it from, good job
    text could be better though
     
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    As previously mentioned the text could use some work and additionally, I think its a tad bit too sharpened in some places but overall, I'm liking it alot. Good concept & execution. I like the light but it lacks depth.
     
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    As previously mentioned the text could use some work and additionally, I think its a tad bit too sharpened in some places but overall, I'm liking it alot. Good concept & execution. I like the light but it lacks depth.
     

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