Well, I am most likely an amateur compared to most of you, and I'm new here. Please C&C this for me. I'd like to get better Thanks! Edit: Vandeleh is my name in Runescape, not a rip.
hm... the flow seems to be going tn the wrong direction.... but i guess it could work that way too. the render also looks bright in random places... try fixing it with a burn/doodge to add a more definite light source. pretty good