It's alright. In my eyes it's very messy and not much flow. The render could have gotten more depth and blended in more. The top left corner where it's black and you put text kind of says to me what happened to the corner? Good try but I see your currents and I don't like this one. Welcome to the forums btw.
Top left corner of the image i used for a background always was black. I tried to dodge it but it went into chaos so I removed the dodge.
mmm yeah -- it needs some work. text needs some fixin' up and the effects in the back just seem too random and add more mess really... try following some tuts
Well for just try and find a sense of flow and give the render some depth. You know what those are right?
