Spiderman Smudge

C&C please, looking for advice.

 

I like it, but maybe bring Spiderman's left (right from frontal POV) out more?

 

yea, now that i think about it, it looks like a good idea. I think that it got covered up from alll the smudging, this entire signature is smudging (except for spiderman of course and text), I tried to cover up both his legs, the one on the right got covered up with red, so i may have smudged to far and made his chestish region get covered up.

 

I think it looks pretty cool...like to see some txt though

 

Ther's text its on the to the left of his arm on the dark part, its small though