hm.... this is another case of FHS (floating head syndrome) the effects seem to cover too much of the render.... and has no real flow or whatever... i love all your other work though
if you'd like i could upload the originals and maybe you'd be able to "discover" more. as far as the floating head syndrome, i get what you're saying but i kinda don't like thinking like that, cause it's limiting. while i don't typically do pieces like this, i just kinda thought that it looked like something's covering the rest of the body, and you can see a piece of the neck. thanks for the feed tho, glad you like the other stuff.
The soft brushing kills the tag and the butterfies don't blend in at all.The stocks not blending in well either. It needs some steady flow to it.