no man it's cool a white piece of paper is to light looks good efx are ice flow too,. but mayb the background could use some more depth. or yeah that is to light. some darker red would be nice then.
I like V1 and the fact how the ending of your nick seems to fade into the background. Nice light effect there and good usage of C4ds to create flow. Me likes: )
add something behind him so the tag won't look so empty. Change the text and add some direction/flow to the tag (dont ask me how)
When I said behind him I said near his head... something vectorish, some colorfull efect, something...