Float Away

Float Far Away...



Second Version:


Comments & Critiques Welcome ^_^

-Zain

 

Looks blurry? I think that's what it is, or low quality looking.

 

I know what you mean
Anyways I never intended to add effects around this tag

I posted a second version which was what I intended to do in first place..

Someone online suggested that I should add stuff to the sides..and i didnt like it so i blurred it all

But yeah what do you think of the second version now?

Z

 

you should add a few more effects in v2,not outside the render,but close to the focal point,and make sure it doesnt cover him up then it'll be sweet now,but v1 is too much stuff and v2 is too less...lol just more effects closer to the render would be perfect,but theyre both good,just could be a tad better

 

Alright will do

Thanks

 

mix one and two, don't use as many effect as you did on the first one, but don't use as little as you did on the second one. the middle one will be the best.

 

the pink at the top and bottom ruins the greatness of the tag.

 

I like v1