The Brumak

Tell me what i can fix and how it looks etc please.

Old Version:


V2:

 

Needs a lightsource , middle dodged sides burned, sides blurred too, new text.

 

pretty much what verbal said, too dark imo

 

Much better, but you should have dodged it a bit, so we see more detail .

 

really nice but the big lightspot isnt really beautiful here =)

the rest looks really good, good job!!

 

I think the V1 is better than the V2 because the v2 is darker than the v1.

You need to work on the texts.

But I like your Background

 

Thanks guys

 

I prefer v2

 

im likin version two more as well, sick job man

 

thanks for all the comments guys tbh i prefer v2 more too

 

work on the text
v2 is better imo
overall nice job
and gears is made of fail tbh

 

The text killed the sig so bad