Delta Rush

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by Sir Gudi, May 17, 2008.

  1. May 17, 2008 at 3:33 PM #1
    Sir Gudi

    Sir Gudi Senior Member

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    I made this because i couldn't think of anything else to do...and my brothers' boss' band was on the radio...

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  2. May 17, 2008 at 5:09 PM #2
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    i like the clouds and the background effects. text is weird cause its overlay at some places. you should put it on top.
    colors are great, good job overall . :D
     
  3. May 18, 2008 at 5:44 AM #3
    Sir Gudi

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    Thanks :)

    After taking a look at some of the other LA here i was expecting more of a "GTFO, Now, never come back" response :P

    I tried putting the text on top but it stood out far too much, i wanted it to seem as if it is coming out of the centre.
     
  4. May 18, 2008 at 7:32 PM #4
    PhanE

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    The bright lines on the top seem to ruin the whole flow of the piece in my opinion.
     

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