Ironman

So tell me what do you guys think???



Cropped one as J_G said:


Coloured Version is not worth seeing :lol: B/w looks better

C&C Appreciated

-Zain

 

i like it take off some of that empty space and it would be better IMO

 

Alright

Thanks

-Zain

EDIT: Cropped it

Now is it betta?

 

BUMP...can I get more Critiques for this tag

I really want to improve

-Zain

 

text takes to much attention and it doesn't really fit in
but the rest of the tag looks pretty cool

 

Got a font technique?

-Z

 

clipping mask .. maybe also place it near ironman
cause the change of texture from left to right is very cool but the text you have right now
doesn't show it that good

so clipping mask and near iron man

 

seems slightly oversharpned at some places which poke the eye.other wise i love this one
the text looks nice man GJ

 

it look good

 

Like it but I can't really tell what that thing in the background is and it annoys me, but I like it

 

2nd one would look good if there was colour

 

v1 is pretty hot

 

Thanks guys

COmments appreciated

-Zain