I tried to create a flow to it, and i also tried to give it a hint of myself into it(pixelation , i love it.) C&C
Keep the original colors, but add in some photofilters and gradients here and there so the colors will blend in slowly and won't look too monotone.
Pretty good job man, i would like to see what it looks like without the pixelation cause from what i can see it is a pretty good job, id work with some more photofilters and gradient maps still though. but im liking it keep it up!
Great job man, I really like the pixelization, Though I think it could be better in some areas. Nice job!