My first since december, rather than just the "I DUZ NOT LYK DIS" type of comments, i'd rather have constructive. EDIT: ======= =======
I DU LYK DIS On a serious note...there seems to be a lack of depth and the effect (c4d?) seems very random...no real flow either. I think the coloring and such was executed well though. Just maybe try to tighten up the flow with the effect(s) perhaps.
Seems like the render's/stock opacity was lowered, looks kinda weird. C4d are too random too, but i like the coloring .
well.. for one the c4Ds still look random ....and they are not aligned and i think you used a bit too much -- this is a think i call ODAJLS <over done adjustment layer syndrome> it seems to happend to me a lot.... like when i add craploads of photophilters and curves and contrast and it ruins the whole tag lmaooo ! i usually just delete all my adjustment layers and do it again