Your focal is a bit crowded, but the tag is nice looking overall. V1 is the best out of those. The Text is poorly placed. That's my only real problem with it.
v3 is my favorite, but reduce the amount of sharpen just a bit also, the red lines dont fit the colors of the sig. Messy, but still really cool.. oh and i love the text on his face a lot good job <3
Very messy and not alot of flow. Cropping and placement could be better, you cut out half the focus point which kills the tags balance. V1 but i would kill the red lines TBH.