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I see no orange ... =P

I think it could use a bit of sharpening and blurring to bring the focal out more. I like the effects near the render, nice work.

 

Messy, no color yet too much shades, text needs work, and render needs to pop out more.

Aside from that, it's nice.

 

i like the effects but change the text! =) and also like others said use sharpen and blur to make the render pop out more ;d

nice job.

 

ok thanks for the comments. i added two new versions

 

I like the first in all honesty.....good job