A Sprite Tag

V1:

V2:

my second sprite tag ever so CnC is really appriciated

 

Needs more of a flow, and it seems a little empty, needs some more effects to bring out the sprite.

 

Come with me if you want to live :lol:

Here is the deal:
Change the burn on the tag, give it a smoother flow, a better lighting and a color composition to it!

Add more effects, may it be C4d effects, renders, or basic smudging as it looks empty...

-Zain

 

thnx for the feedback, will work on your suggestions and will try to add a V3 soon

 

It also looks unbalanced. Everything on one side, and empty on the other. Maybe move it more to the center.
And as said above it could use more effects and a bit more flow.

 

yeah, fix the colors on the sprite, and some color variation on the right side would be nice too. also id move the sprite over and crop the tag a bit, it's way to big imo