pretty cool, i liek both versions. good job but u spelt edward elrick wrong. and im not sure if u did the text on purpose but its one is all, and all is one. but thats really not a problem unless ur really picky liek me hahahaha.
i agree v.2 looks better and no text ftw also id blur the water at 65% then the horizon like at 85% to aid depth...
Don't know why I put an h, probably because I was doing German homework at the time and the Germans use too much h's in their spellings xD. But I am reading the manga and in there it's all is the world and one is me.