Meh

wow first sig in a while (since februari I think)
I suck
if anyone is interested in finishing it let me know

 

2 focals. hmm .. the idea is good .. try to add more effects on the background .. needs depth ..
and add a 1-2 px black border.
looks good.. but could be better.

 

thanks for the comment

 

looks tough to me...nice try tho

 

The main thing I think it needs is a bit more darkness on the side to bring out the depth more. Maybe a bit of sharpening to the effects around the two guys.