ok -- so here it is --- its kinda wired with all the pop outness and it looks n00by to the max but i just wanted to get some CnC to know how to improve on it . i know the render is LQ as well... but the guy insisted on using that render soo --- oh well...
your vectors are fine, the render ruins it though i dont really like all the text, and it seems TOO simple...... maybe add some more FX of some sort, not just vectors