Need Help On Unfinished Shirt Design

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  1. AG Birdman

    AG Birdman Senior Member

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    it is unfinished, but i dont know what else would be good to add. Also, i am trying to keep it a vector so i can resize it to fit well on the shirt. And advice would be great.

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    what it would look like on shirt
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    version 2
    changed the color and added a wood effect
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  2. LL COOL JEW

    LL COOL JEW Well-Known Member

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    I personally can't stand the orange color
    and the stroke on the huntington makes it look amateur at best
    but I love the actual design on the television
     
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    tt speedy1 Senior Member

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    try blending the design with the shirt.
    the text is horrible, other then that looks great
     
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    I'd suggest putting a white overlay at the top left of the screen to create that reflection. Maybe on the knobs too to show that they are metal, and even on the wood of the TV to create a bezel.

    It just seems a little plain to me. What exactly is the objective of this?
     
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    Huntington text sucks. Those drop shadows are gonna be very ugly when printed as well.

    I like everything but the text. Also make the TV edges round, it will look better. The shirt should also be the color of the tv but with a darker or lighter tone to it.
     
  6. AG Birdman

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    New one:
    Took out text because i couldn't find a way to make it good. Added antenna.

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    If you dd the text, try to make it look like metallic, as it should be, like highlights with clipping mask and something shiny look. the placements in the buttons look weird to me too, otherwise it's a great shirt.
     
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    looks good
    id try making the back of the tv and put it on the back
     
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    That's a really good idea dalecyt.

    It's looking nice now. Antenna was a great touch.
     
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    Personally, I would wear a shirt that had those blue lines a bit more vertical, and spanning from shirt wearer's right hip to left shoulder with that yellow pulse on it, probably on a white tee.
    If you stick too much on a t-shirt, it gets obnoxious.
    I don't mean to come off as stuck up or something, but I wouldn't wear it.
    The design is nice, but there's a difference to something cool on a flat screen and something cool that you're sticking on your chest.
     
  11. AG Birdman

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    that is actually good idea. What do you think about this?

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    Wouldn't wear the first one.

    Would wear the second one.
     
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    I think i feel the same way rene. Anyone else have any input on the new shirt?
     

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